Faith

=Faith,=  .   __**English Springer Spaniels** __ By: Faith  Some dogs are hard to have a relationship with and can be dangers. But not English Springer Spaniels. They are pretty dogs. They are also loving, family dogs that rarely nip or bite and if trained well can be great hunters. English Springer Spaniels are pretty dogs that come in three different colors, dusty black, light brown, and creamy white. They also have feathers flopping from side to side on there legs. Now it mite seam weird that a dog has feathers. They really are only long strains of hair. I have an English Springer Spaniel at my house that is rainbow colored. She truly is a beautiful dog. Not only are they pretty but they are great family pets. They understand that little kids don’t really no the ropes yet and there for have no egression to them. The reason the have no egression to them is because the have very understanding minds. Plus they are insist on lots of cuddling and if you don’t do it they’ll do it for you. My dog loves to cuddle and if she see a chance to cuddle she goes for it if not that shell lay at your Sid right before you go to sleep. These dogs are also good hunters. They are bread to hunt. And have the instinct to do it. Plus they are equipped with speed and being able to leap high in the sky. My dog loves to hunt she practices on the squirrels but the only thing my dog has caught is a dove this time it was merely luck she rammed it into a pole but if dead animal aren’t your thing this dog is probably not for you I am sorry I do not have an ending. Faith! I wish my dog tranned well. and there colors are so unice. I suggest you should indent. BB . I like how you discribed their color and that their good with kids your firend, lauren I liked how you told that there good hunters and you added real examples lorelei You chose a good breed to write about. Allison

great vocabulary FAITH!! But she also hunts pink and black coats! @lise

I enjoyed you use of a variety sentence begginings    I love your verbs like the one flopping !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ryan Lovely word choice I enjoyed how you used common sayings instead of don't quiet know about alot, you use don't quiet know the ropes amazing i'd neeevvvvvvvver in 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,1 usee that Pawsome Maddie!

- Faith

Try to change prety to a differint word! Like gorges or something like that!!!!!!!!!!! - C.P. (Chanda Panda)!  Nice peice.**__//Jack//__** i loved your peice I diddn't know what that dog was! but maby put in some more verbs. a.f. I think you should look at one of your no's but other then that I love your word choice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! __ryan__ __//I really love your lead it really tells you what the dog is like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MB!!!!! ( Markell) I Think you should maybe you put more verbs in.//__

you have alot of //**__they's__**// in it. Change!!!~!~!!!!!!!!J>B

Work an connecting you sentances okay, and your the best writer in the class ?

