Allison

__ I Believe in Having Teachers __ By Allison Swomley

Without teachers no one would have jobs. Teachers provide education, and give people friends. Teachers are very important because when they teach kids learn so they can get better jobs. With no jobs people could not get the many to live. Teaching high school math is what my dad does and that helps people get into college so they can get jobs.

Not only do they give kids jobs they provide education. Teachers give all kinds of education. One thing in math they teach you is working with money. Without knowing how to work with money you could not buy any- thing. When they teach, they teach you for life.

With no teachers there would schools, and with no schools no one would have friends. School is a good opportunity to make friends. School is how I made most of my friends. If you were home schooled you would not have very many friends.

So that is why I think it is very important to have teachers. I so agrie with you!Y.Q I love how you put in alot of your own experiences! Maiya I love how you have three good main topics for your story. its looking awsome! Faith I think you did a great job! I like how you talked about Daddy! I love you! Mommy. you might want to change have to a different word. try to chang give to somthing like suplieor what ere you whant. I think U did fine with all your verbs dont mind paul!!@lise I will change my pice when I have time -allison good story, more VERBS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, PAUL I think you should have a little more verbs so it can become better. From Renae anything doesn't have a dash in it. I Agree that we should have teachers! I also could not see any thing you need to change!- Chanda Techers are importent!!!**//__J@ck__//** on the 2 to last paragraph u can also do the word also in the beginning of the sentence.yvonne. When you wrote: With no jobs people could not get the many to live, did you mean money? Also, when you wrote: ......with money you could not buy any-thing, did you mean anything? I think you have good sentence beginnings. -Maiya I love how your paraghraphs beginings conect to each ather. it flows well.F@ith I LOVE your topic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ryan