Lauren

Lauren,
 I'm a tottle dog freak

**__sad thing jack__**
resone that I want to help dog's is because the closet thing that I'd ever get to having a dog was taken away from me. I had such a relationship with Jack that I now him better than his owner. I made cristmas presants for him. Jack was sent to a bettter home with children that could play with him around the clock. he also had a golden reitrever to play with if the kids were gone or doing something alse. jack was a border collie and was very acive one never should run with his favroit toy wich in fact was a watering can. he'd trip you and whould ran around and play keep away untillyou would trck him and through something alse .I miss Jack and mabe I'll see him one day but mabe not.

alright so now I'v got a diffrent dog that well is just as much fun that Jack was his name is Charlie Brown he is only six mouths old and I walk almost every day. And again the dog listens to me more than the owner for a while if in needed to take Charlie back I would have to try a few times before he would go into his house. CB just didn't want to go home. I even tought him to go down slides. I enjoy his company very much. **__I Believe Essay__ ** By Lauren = =

** First off, **** what is a humane center?  It’s a place were pets can stay until there owners pick them up or until they find a new owner that’s going to take care of them. It’s also like a hospital of them if they got sick while there homeless or they‘ve been homeless so long that there just sick. ** Humane centers are the best place to adopt a pet and a great place for homeless pets that’s why I think that we should take action to help them. **  I liked your story it had lots of cool deatails like theres a 60% of chance that you help a poor animal. lorelei your story is great it has lots of details aspen just by reading the first pharagraph I understud the problem pluse i like the verb raise y.q i liked how you used the word homeless Lorelei I love all the info you give like theres a 60% chance that you help a poor animal. your best friend, Faith  there are some incorrect spellings and incorect grammer. what haped to jack sickstory,imeancool,paul that is really good it all most made me cry jessica animals ROCK cool sentenc beginings meat loaf thats the best pace about dogs i have ever herd.allison
 *   I Believe it’s important to help the different humane centers in your country by bringing lost animals to them rising money for them and adopting pets from them. **
 *  Have you ever seen a homeless pet on the side of the road and you had the chance to stop but you kept on going thinking that it would find a way home? But guess what there is a sixty %  chance that it won’t that’s way you help the poor animal on the side of the road and tack it to a humane center  it’s important to take it to the place  because they can take care  of it and find the owner or find a new owner. **
 *   On the other hand, it’s important to raise money for the different humane centers. Reason so they can have money to buy medicines, toys, furncher money to keep the place running and money to add on to the building for more animals. Not only should we raise money for them but we should adopt animals from the humane centers. It’s  a good place to buy pet’s because it’s cheaper ,different types verities <span style="font-size: 16pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Tempus Sans ITC'; mso-spacerun: yes; msospacerun: yes;"> of pet’s <span style="font-size: 16pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Tempus Sans ITC'; mso-spacerun: yes; msospacerun: yes;"> and well cared for animals. <span style="font-size: 16pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Tempus Sans ITC'; mso-spacerun: yes; msospacerun: yes;"> You can get pet’s young and old form black to white and for dogs to cats. **
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<span style="font-size: 16pt; color: #d900ff; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Tempus Sans ITC'; msotabcount: 1;">some of the sentences in your story are very meaninfull and really want to make people help animals also it very much changes for people that dont care about animals. <span style="font-size: 16pt; color: #000000; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Tempus Sans ITC'; msotabcount: 1;">Lorelei cooooooooolllllll story dudet,PAUL!!!! <span style="font-size: 16pt; color: #ff0a0d; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Tempus Sans ITC'; msotabcount: 1;">Maybe chane help to give them another chance BESIDES THAT ITS ONE GREAT STORY. CASEY <span style="font-size: 16pt; color: #000000; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Tempus Sans ITC'; msotabcount: 1;">

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