Alise

Alise Foster Homes By: Alise Foster homes are very good for unloved, starved, and on the street kids. First is unloved kids, have you seen kids getting hurt and wine because their not loved from parents. I’ve seen kids on TV looking so abused, people here and there love kids but not all of the parents. Next is starved kids, kids are dying because they are not fed three square meals a day, because their fridge is bare not even a Crum is there. I’ve never had an experience of a starved child. Lastly is on the street kids, kids are on the streets because they don’t have any home to live in so the foster people come and gently say “Your going to a new home “, and so they have no choice but to hop in the car.  And so foster homes are so a great home for kids!! I love hoe you used your words:Chanda The begining of each paragragraph is very simeler:ZACK

Good. Allison I love how you now a lot about foster homes and were able to expline your story well. your friend, Faith! I liked how you explained so much about fosters Lorelei in sted ofstrved howabouthungry yo wad up. on the theses u might want to put generous instead of good. yvonne I love the way you said "unloved and starved kids" then using loveless and hungy kids.Casey i feel sorry for the homeless interesting story,paul