Annie

annie Firemen By: Annie Firemen are very important in our life because when we need help they are always there for us. To begin, they are always ready for anything that comes there way; Like if you call 911 they are at your house in about 3 minutes. They come to us so rapidly because there equipment is always ready. In fact, to be a firefighter you have to pass through a lot of school, but they are very well educated. In there school they have to put out fires and much more. My brother has experienced all the school because he is now a firefighter and had to go through all the school for 5 years. Also, they save our lives. Like if you were dying they would never give up on you. They would keep fighting for us. As a result, firefighters are very important to our safety. Annie that is very good and that is a lot of school you are a good witer that is really good love jessica your B.F.F In the first paragraf when you said to begin I thout it was good. Allison i saw go mabe you can chang go to pass jessica At the begening you should chang life to lives Love ya jessica you are the best BFF wink-wink and you are a wallnut and you smell like one to. In stead of saying, Like if you were dying... you could take out the like and gest say If you were dying... Allison really u cant change anything its all perfect. yvonne. I love how you put feeling and emotion in your story. I can tell you have lots of faith in firefighters (which is a good thing). I loved your piece. -Maiya