Brayton

Brayton pet by brayton I believe it’s important for kids to have pets in their lives. It’s important for kids to have pets because they are a persons best friend it show you responsibility, and you get to meet new people while walking your dog. Having a pet around keep you company. When I get home, I go downstairs, open their kennel, and say potty time! My dogs always get excited to see me. At night, my dogs open my door and sniff around and find me. After they find me, they jump on my bed and sleep with me. They are always there to keep me company which shows now they are my friends. When having a pet, you need to take really good care of them which shows you responsibility. Every day I have to feed my dogs and let them outside to go to the bathroom and if you do all that stuff it shows you responsibility and it helps them live longer. If you take your dogs on a walk you get to meet new people. When I take my dogs on a walk I meet lots of new people. Sometimes my dogs play with my grandmas dog they sometimes they play with the cat. I like how you said you and your cat get along. Renae I love how your words:Alise you might want to change 'having' to a different word. and mabe 'tri' and change say.Faith! I think you should make your begining better. Renae again I love your story but you for got some words and letters but other wise you have a great story!C.E.(Chanda Escue) awesome story. change some of your centence beginings.zach
 * I suggest you use more transistions in your sentence begenings. Aspen **