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Markell Friends are very important in life. They are very supportive also, nice, and very trustworthy. They can always support you throughout your life.

A remarkable friend is nice. If you have a friend that is mean you don’t really have a friend at all. All my friends are very nice,like Chanda and my other friend Faith. Whenever I go over to there house they have a favorite toy they like to play with, it is not always the same toy. Once I was playing with both of them and I asked if I could play with the toy. They thought about it for a second, and then said yes. A smile formed on my face. Thanks, I said. If you want a friend just make sure they’re nice.

All friends are supportive. They are even if they’re mean. My friends are all supportive but, I am going to tell you a story of only two. The bell was about to ring and something bad had happened I was horrified I would get in trouble! They kept on saying it will be all right. When I got home my mom said that whatever I did is all right. So just remember your friends are always supportive.

Also you have to have trustworthy friends. I have some. But I am going to tell you a story of just two. There names are Chanda and Alise. Once I was at recess and I knew something about my brother so I told my friends, and they swore not to tell anyone, and they never did! As you can tell are a terrific thing to have. Nice Job on the story on friends, treific, from Jack, yaaaaa !  - Markell I enjoyed your sector on trust. It gives you an good example and is truly a good paragraph. Your Trazitions from each paragraph rock - anyemouse. I love all your examples they are vrey well writen your friend Faith. P.S love the word choice like remarkable. Awsome! -markell you did awesome with your story!!2@lise I like how you added Faith, Chanda, and Alise. Allison I love your topic and you youse great examples!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ryan nice! a smile foremed on my face! mabe change smile to grin or somthing. FH! -Markell I would indent at each parigraf!! Also I would put the title at the top of your page. because I did not see it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!P.S. This is from your BFF! CP! Chanda Panda! Your right, fierends are suportive.JB. you did prove to me friends are impotant but maby change boring verbs. a.f. you have a great story i think you should add more. Renae Thats an aswem pisce, i hilited words that yoused twice.hdjfvxhkcjvkxcjack

Markell I Highlighted two words i'll change them tonight, but if I don't get to it don't freak. I'll change it A.S.A.P. All and all your peice is THEE best!!!!! But What about me? Maddi e you can change the word they to a different word brayton Your peace is great but try using verbs for sentance beginings. Aspen