Yvonne

yvonne __ Mexico __ ** By: Yvonne ** Going to Mexico can be an experience never forgotten. There is the unforgettable candy, or the freshly made food, but the best part of Mexico is the Mexico beaches. I admire their candy because it’s very unique. The candy is unique because it’s quit soft, usually wrapped, sticky, colorful, and it has a sweet variety taste of fruit flavor in usually one lollypop. Sometimes the taste of a Mexican lollypop just gives me too much energy and I think it is something other than a normal lollypop. Once I bought a lollypop and accidentally thought that it was lip stick. Not only is the candy good but the food is delicious. That’s why I react very differently from Mexican food from American food. Really I can’t explain how large Mexican food is, but I bet you’ll be full when you just eat half. The plates that they serve are so large that three plates can be breakfast and lunch for a pig or a sumo wrestler. It’s really spicy so most people tell the chefs to not put to much spice into the food. Some people enjoy having spice in your food. That’s me and three fourths of my family who is a fan of super picante chili. [Picante means really hot.] Their beaches are awesome to stand on, and feel a warm breeze rushing through your feet and hair. Also you can find shells just by roaming around. If you’re lucky you could find little fish and take them home. Once I went to the beach just because I thought it would be fun, so my uncle took me and I found so many shells. But only one interested me. It was white with brown speckles. Conveniently it was a crab shell but the crab was still in there. Though it gave me a shock I have to admit was an awesome experience. So going to Mexico can be an experience never forgotten. Believe me I know. And once your at the border of Mexico you are going to want to do these awesome experiences of mine in Mexico. I love how you describe everything! It makes me feel like I'm in Mexico! Maiya It sounds fun, now I want to go there! Paul your story is awesome I could'nt change anything except just space your paragraph. zach i LOVE THE PART WERE YOU discribed the beach andwhen you said how the wind wiped your hair.LAUREN awesome verbs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,paul that is really good jessica ! I have had mexcin candy befor, and you deskribed iy so well I could tast it agin.allison that is the best word chose I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ryan I love you sentence beginnings, they all start differently. Your piece is fun to read because of your facts, details, and different sentence beginnings. I especialy liked when you wrote: Not only is the candy good but the food is delious, you refered to the paragraph before it and the paragraph you were starting (do that in almost every piece and it will turn out great!). I LOVE your piece. -Maiya You could mabe change your also's to somthing like, dont forget.... ather then that you did awsome alot better then I could have ever done! FAITH!

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your story makes me want to go to Mexico!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rya n __//You make me want to go to Mexico so bad because of your describeshn MB//__ ======