Zachary

Firemen by: Zach

Firemen play a big part in our community.

First, firemen save lives of people and animals. Most of the places that firemen live have a dog. The dog’s nose helps find people lost in a burning building. One of the main ways that firemen save lives is taking people out of a burning building. They also take cats out of trees. Firemen use a ladder to get to the top of the tree. Another way to get cats out of tree is a scissor lift.

Firemen use many different tools to put out fires, such as a latter to take up the water hose to the top of the building and eliminate the fire. They try to keep the fire secure in a specific place and shrink it there. Sometimes they use special chemicals to put out fires. That’s how firemen put out fires.

Then firemen look at the fire damage. What they do is check out the damage done. Then they estimate the cost to repair the damage. They also try to figure out what started the fire if nobody knows what started it. When I had a fire in my house they looked at the fire damage.

That is why firemen play such an enormous part in our community. I love all the info in your story like how you told me about the different tools they use. It was really fun to read! **Faith**! I like how you stared and ended with the same sentents I also liked how you sayed what they used to help the cats **__Lauren__! I sugest that u change the word big to huge!Yvonne!** zach tri to use stronger verbs but I like the way you said chemicals. **LAUREN i now understand the purpose of fireman and on the first pharagraph instead of burning u can do blazing y.q Instead of the verb "save lives" say "rescue live". Casey ** I liked how you used the word secure Lorelei cool   kinda short docostory,paul hay is it going good that is a really good story and you have to be really breav to do that job jessica try to use verbs in the begining of the sentence lauren

there are parts in your story that don't make sense but you describe things very well.Lorelei coolstory,paul