Jack

Parents By Jack I believe my parents are important because they give rules and discipline, but most important, help. Every good parent gives you rules. A good example is, you have to go to bed at 9:00 or you’ll be in huge trouble. One of my experiences is I can’t play video games until I finish my homework. If I do, I’ll never get my homework done.

Imagine a world without parents disciplining you. You would be mean and hurt people. An experience is my brothers and I fight like were not disciplined. We’re mean to each other and some times punch. An example if you’re evil like that you might get a time out witch is where you sit and do nothing. Parents are always helping you and you might not know it. An example is homework. They help you find the answer together. Also I have an experience. My mom helped me clean my room.

These are some of my reasons why I believe parents are important Great Peice!!!!!!! I enjoy your section on deciplin it is amazing and trueful and it gives you a real life situation. parents are important!! nice story!!! bb

I enioyed your peice I think your second pahagraph is very realistic and true. Two word choice i think would be o.k to change is mean and hurt. To Agrissive and inju

great, every thing is perfect and I believe in parents to! A.M strict rules bro. zach. your right parents are important but I whould say so more about what eals parents do. lauren i think u'r peice is fab. because of u'r reasons.yvonne I would try useing more exemples then you have.Casey

Jack, I highlighted two word with the same sentance begining's tell me if you want me to change it back. All and all great peice. ½ + ½ = M.N.L  you might to change an to a different word P.S. abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz !Brayton You might want to change a few of your beginings to transitions. Aspen good job Jack. You need to work on your begining more. Renae