Jessica

Jessica I believe by: Jessica I believe kids can save the environment by picking up trash, recycling and reusing items.

Picking up trash is the main part of helping the environment the first thing you can do is don’t liter if you don’t liter that saves one baby turtle or some ones life. If you ever just go on a walk you might think about bring a trash bag so if you see trash you can pick it up. A other way of saving the environment is to recycle. If you have ever seen are dump it is pretty full so if you have a peace of paper that you can’t erase you can just recycle it and get a new peace and if you have an extra trashcan recycle stuff in it.

A other word to recycle is reuse. So we are not using so many trees we can reuse one way to reuse is if you use your better tubs or cheese tubs again you probably saved the earth a little more. If you can do those things you are an earth saver buy. I agree with you and you have good reasons. It's good. Allison I think you should recycle but i think you should put a little bit more examples. Markell I agree that this is an inportant thing.Yvonne

I think is a good idea! from renae Insted of using environment os much try using something like our earth.-allison you might want to change picking to somthing like snach or somthing.FH!

WOW!!!, WOW!!!! WOW!!!!! AMAZING SUBJECT, wow wow i enjoyed the part of the babie turttels. PAWSOME MADDIE I LOVE BABY TURTLES! PEOPLE SHOULD HELP AND ME. ALSO i SUGGEST SOME VERBS BUT I LIKE HOW YOU PICKED IT.BB You repeted your self When you said resicle and reuse itums! -Chanda You should chang 'the first thing you can do is don't litter' to something like 'littering is bad so don't do it. It could help save our environment.' Allison i sugest that u put diffrent paragraph like another and also can work perfectly -Yvonne I like your piece and I think you have good sentence beginnings. I think you should put a little more resons and examples. -Maiya your piece is very well orginized and you have great beginings. F@ith!!