Connor

//__ I Believe __//
By Connor  Exercise is important because it keeps muscles strong, keeps weight down and can be fun.

Exercise is important because it keeps muscles strong and keeps your body active. Exercise is also important because you can lift more like grocery’s rocks and stuff.

Most of all it keeps weight down so you don’t haft to worry about it keeps you at the perfect balance and then you can do more like ride a scoter or play on playgrounds and run faster. Last but not least it can be fun. You can do it with family or friends or by your self.

I like how you talk about musules from Brayton I like how you talk about musules and lifting things from Renae. you should try using different verb than run like sprint or gallop Lorelei Instead of useing "STUFF" use or other heavy household appences. Casey love ya story more verbs kapeesh.,paul Its a little small but good. Jack connor that is realy good but you should put in if you exercise if you do then what do you do? going good jessica I think you should put more detals in it and make your pace longer.allison I think you shoud make your peace longer! ryan good work. Zach you should problly add more deatails like what kinds of exersises you can do other than that i liked it.Lorelei next time you should write a little more details than you did beacause its very short and you could do better than that and think how you could make it bettter that but other than that its pretty good by the way next S.A is due. too short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,but other than that good story,Paul$ Maybe change stronge to powerful and see if it fits? Casey you should pobably add more details. but its pretty good. annie