Brianna

brianna By: Brianna I believe friendship is important to have. No one to                       Play with or to talk to, friends help you, and there always honest. It’s really hard to play games by yourself. Besides its fun to play games with your friends. When you have friends you can ask for a cell phone. And call them and just talk about stuff. Then you call them to get together to come over and play games or just talk and laugh. Friends shouldn’t lie to each other The truth hurts. Say like your friends is wearing something awful. Tell them maybe they would rather wear something in your closet. Tell them to wear this because it looks great on them. Now your friend will wear clothes that’s not terrible on them. Friends help you out like if you in a sticky situation. If a person is being mean they help you out. Another way friends help you out is by helping them in activities. When I was in girl scouts there were many fun activities to do with my friends. We often do crafts, hike and cook to help each other. Plus in girl scouts its all about helping each other. These are some of the reasons that Friendship is so important.

I like how you talk about friendship.Brayton

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its perfickt a argre that frends are inportint it was as good as can be. connor there isn't many verbs but the ones you have are great! aspen

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I liked the way you thought so posive lovley peice M.L!!!!! brianna loved your peice but maby you could ad more verbs aspen you did good you should add a little bit more verbs renae I love your story put diffrent senence begining in though lauren. love it but mabey instead of talk use conversation. yvonne