Assignments

Feedback: Once we get feedback from a real audience, you will see what a difference there is between feedback and great feedback. When you comment on this post, please answer the following questions in complete sentences. Make sure to really share some great thinking.

1. How did you feel about the feedback you got? 2. Does this feedback help you see why it is so important to be specific? 3. Please describe the feedback you wish you received.

Here is an example answer so that you can see what kind of comments are expected:

//Ms. Hyatt,//

//I did not feel good about the feedback I got because I did not really learn much. I do not think I can improve my story with the feedback I received. I can see that it is important to be specific. When people just write "nice job" it makes me feel like they really didn't have anything to say about my story. It's almost as if they didn't even listen to me when I read my piece. I know that some parents had a hard time since they didn't know what to write, and I know that some parents had a hard time writing in English, but I definitely have some ideas about the feedback I wish I received. I wish that people had written specific feedback that told me more about how to make my writing better, or told me more about what was great in my piece.//

//Your friend,// //Faith//

Now, please go ahead and comment. Use my example as an example. Please DO NOT just copy what I wrote. Use your own words and your own thoughts. Thanks!~ Ms. Hyatt